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Dec 28, 2023Liked by Brendan O'Kane

You had me at demimonde valedictorian. Google thinks you're the first ever, and why not?

Third-stanza liberal translation is definitely a thing, though. I'm thinking about forcing myself to translate in reverse for a while, to break the habit of tight first lines and good-enough last lines.

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I am new to Bluesky and I'm finding Brendan's posts to be seriously addictive. I know little about poetry and nothing about ancient China but these are delicious.

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Dec 28, 2023Liked by Brendan O'Kane

Landscape painting with a verse

I putz around for forty years

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Dec 29, 2023Liked by Brendan O'Kane

The party scene, I’m first in class

A river Bacchus, artsy faffing

Rate the high and mighty, laughing

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Jan 7Liked by Brendan O'Kane

These posts make my day. I sang it to Tom Lehrer, by the way. Brendan, please never stop, or go away. Who cares for examinations - the demimonde shall hold sway.

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